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I would like to get some feedback on....

Post by JP_Sasuke17 » Mon May 21, 2007 12:21 am

this simfile that I made today. It's my first ever simfile and I would like some feedback on things like sync, overall patterns and such. Please if you have any comments just put them on bemanistyle since I'll be checking it often to see what I need to improve upon.

Anyways here it is:
http://www.bemanistyle.com/sims/simfile.php?id=15866
I just love the way Dancing on Arrows make me feel, especially when I pass out from this song....

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Post by Riot » Mon May 21, 2007 12:39 am

First impression: Banner/background is pixellated and amateur-looking and you gotta fix the difficulty rating... it's at 1. Not a huge deal, just annoying.

As for the file. There were a few patterns that I think unnecessarily tie up your feet and require you to either double step or lose your balance. The 16th notes are kind of fun but don't really go with anything in the song. I don't really think a lot of it goes exactly with the song, but it's kind of a hard song to go right along with unless you're going to make it harder. I get the impression that this song is about a 7 or 8 footer. Also, the mines are unnecessary in my opinion.

Other than that, not too bad for your first song! Lemme know if you want me to post my pad files I made awhile back.
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Post by JP_Sasuke17 » Mon May 21, 2007 1:00 am

Yeah, the banner and BG were a DEFINITE rush job I'll admit that.

I meant to fix some stuff like difficulty rating but I didn't have much time to work on it just as with the pics. I'll be putting more time and thought into my next sim files. I think I'll try some techno songs that no one has stepped since artists like Sharpnel and such are so over-stepped it's pathetic.
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Post by lgolem » Mon May 21, 2007 1:56 am

meh...it was so-so....it doesn't really seem to go with the music....

ALSO Mines are stupid period.....

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Post by SoDeepPolaris » Mon May 21, 2007 10:47 am

lgolem wrote:meh...it was so-so....it doesn't really seem to go with the music....

ALSO Mines are stupid period.....
Just cause you can't avoid them...
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Post by lgolem » Mon May 21, 2007 11:49 am

SoDeepPolaris wrote:
lgolem wrote:meh...it was so-so....it doesn't really seem to go with the music....

ALSO Mines are stupid period.....
Just cause you can't avoid them...
no I can avoid...they are just fucking stupid...just about as stupid as the speed change on Handsome Character that Pass Crazy on NX

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Post by letshavetea » Wed May 23, 2007 9:18 pm

Riot pretty much covered my thoughts lol
lgolem wrote:ALSO Mines are stupid period.....
I agree. I only hit one of them, but it was just like... almost empty screen to something in each arrow slot... it was kinda ehh

If you threw a few in there... then it might be okay... but... when in doubt go without ;) (ps... mines suck)

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Post by JP_Sasuke17 » Mon May 28, 2007 1:05 am

Okay, my second simfile is a edit of 321 stars.

http://www.bemanistyle.com/sims/simfile.php?id=16049
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Post by hascoolnickname » Mon May 28, 2007 11:06 am

seems like it could be on the konami boxes. solid foot file imo
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Post by danc1005 » Mon May 28, 2007 9:29 pm

If it doesn't have a 321 max combo, it's crap.
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Post by JP_Sasuke17 » Mon May 28, 2007 10:20 pm

Well, as long as I am getting better I'm satisfied.


On a side note, I didn't realize that 321 Stars actually had 321 Steps lol
I just love the way Dancing on Arrows make me feel, especially when I pass out from this song....

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