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I would like to get some feedback on....

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 12:21 am
by JP_Sasuke17
this simfile that I made today. It's my first ever simfile and I would like some feedback on things like sync, overall patterns and such. Please if you have any comments just put them on bemanistyle since I'll be checking it often to see what I need to improve upon.

Anyways here it is:
http://www.bemanistyle.com/sims/simfile.php?id=15866

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 12:39 am
by Riot
First impression: Banner/background is pixellated and amateur-looking and you gotta fix the difficulty rating... it's at 1. Not a huge deal, just annoying.

As for the file. There were a few patterns that I think unnecessarily tie up your feet and require you to either double step or lose your balance. The 16th notes are kind of fun but don't really go with anything in the song. I don't really think a lot of it goes exactly with the song, but it's kind of a hard song to go right along with unless you're going to make it harder. I get the impression that this song is about a 7 or 8 footer. Also, the mines are unnecessary in my opinion.

Other than that, not too bad for your first song! Lemme know if you want me to post my pad files I made awhile back.

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 1:00 am
by JP_Sasuke17
Yeah, the banner and BG were a DEFINITE rush job I'll admit that.

I meant to fix some stuff like difficulty rating but I didn't have much time to work on it just as with the pics. I'll be putting more time and thought into my next sim files. I think I'll try some techno songs that no one has stepped since artists like Sharpnel and such are so over-stepped it's pathetic.

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 1:56 am
by lgolem
meh...it was so-so....it doesn't really seem to go with the music....

ALSO Mines are stupid period.....

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 10:47 am
by SoDeepPolaris
lgolem wrote:meh...it was so-so....it doesn't really seem to go with the music....

ALSO Mines are stupid period.....
Just cause you can't avoid them...

Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 11:49 am
by lgolem
SoDeepPolaris wrote:
lgolem wrote:meh...it was so-so....it doesn't really seem to go with the music....

ALSO Mines are stupid period.....
Just cause you can't avoid them...
no I can avoid...they are just fucking stupid...just about as stupid as the speed change on Handsome Character that Pass Crazy on NX

Posted: Wed May 23, 2007 9:18 pm
by letshavetea
Riot pretty much covered my thoughts lol
lgolem wrote:ALSO Mines are stupid period.....
I agree. I only hit one of them, but it was just like... almost empty screen to something in each arrow slot... it was kinda ehh

If you threw a few in there... then it might be okay... but... when in doubt go without ;) (ps... mines suck)

Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:05 am
by JP_Sasuke17
Okay, my second simfile is a edit of 321 stars.

http://www.bemanistyle.com/sims/simfile.php?id=16049

Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 11:06 am
by hascoolnickname
seems like it could be on the konami boxes. solid foot file imo

Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 9:29 pm
by danc1005
If it doesn't have a 321 max combo, it's crap.

Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 10:20 pm
by JP_Sasuke17
Well, as long as I am getting better I'm satisfied.


On a side note, I didn't realize that 321 Stars actually had 321 Steps lol